James Watson ⋅ San Diego , CA General Atomics ⋅ 30 years experience

Hi Walter-

I am retired after a 40 year career in industry where I hired over 100 people. Now I am helping veterans like yourself by helping with their resumes. If you would e-mail me your resume (drjamesfwatson@gmail.com) I would be happy to comment on it.

Jim Watson

Kelly Williams ⋅ Newark , DE Stars to Stripes Military Transition Assistance ⋅ 10 years experience

Short answer: Do not use the long USAJobs version of your resume for any corporate application.

My company provides free resume critiques to all military service members. You can submit your resume to us via email or by using our secure online submission form:

Email: Info@ExpertResumeSolutions.com
Form: http://tinyurl.com/ERS-Resume

Please allow 3-5 business days for completion.

We use two different formats for corporate and federal applications. I can send you examples of each to get you started.
Connect with me on LinkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/kellywilliamsmaresca/

Thank you for your service.

Warmest Regards,

Kelly Williams
Career Strategist & President
Security Cleared Careers
Expert Resume Solutions
Business: (732) 686-6455
Email: info@expertresumesolutions.com
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Darlene Casstevens ⋅ Oxford , NC Liberty University ⋅ 13 years experience

Hi Walter,
I used a 2-page resume and I at least got an interview. My interview was with the United States Census Bureau. In my opinion, too much information can be overwhelming. Best of luck in your pursuits!
Darlene

Gus Lawson ⋅ Springfield , VA Lawson Advisors, LLC ⋅ 20 years experience

Hi, Walter. For the corporate companies, use a shorter resume. I am still a Booz Allen employee. If you see a position that interests you, I'd be happy to connect you with the hiring manager. What is your ideal position? What skills do you want to use? What are you passionate about?

Karen Harding ⋅ Puyallup , WA Mutual Of Omaha ⋅ 7 years experience

Good day LTD. Frey,

My name is Karen Harding and my father is a Navy Veteran. He served for 24 years and retired in 1971 as LTD. Commander so I am a Navy Brat. I am aware of the many transfers we did as a family and understand it can be difficult to assimilate once you retire.

I am currently looking for sharp, ambitious, people to work along side 12 great companies in Financial services. I am new to this website so do not know how to contact you or vise verse. Let me know if you have an interest in getting more information on the position.

Karen