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Looking for some assistance with my resume

Veteran

Doug Andrews Manorville , NY

Hello everyone,

My ETS date is getting closer and closer and I'm hoping to get some help with my resume. I've spent most of my career as a Military Intelligence Systems Maintainer/Integrator (35T) and I'm primarily seeking employment as either a systems administrator or a network administrator. If any one is willing to look over my resume and give me any pointers I would be greatly appreciative!

Thanks,

Doug

6 January 2015 7 replies Resumes & Cover Letters

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Advisor

James Watson San Diego , CA

Hi Doug-

I am retired after a 40 year career in industry where I hired over 100 people. Now I am helping veterans like yourself by helping with their resumes. If you would e-mail me your resume (drjamesfwatson@gmail.com) I would be happy to comment on it. I also recommend the book "Tired of Eating Peanut and Butter Sandwiches? - Tips to Get a Job Fast" available on Amazon. It contains practical advice. Good luck in your search!!

Jim Watson

Advisor

Kelly Williams Newark , DE

Doug,

My company provides free resume critiques to all military service members. You can submit your resume to us via email or by using our secure online submission form:

Email: Info@ExpertResumeSolutions.com
Form: http://www.tinyurl.com/ERS-Critique

Please allow 3-5 business days for completion.

We use two different formats for corporate and federal applications. I can send you examples of each to get you started.

Connect with me on LinkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/kellywilliamsmaresca/

Thank you for your service.

Warmest Regards,

Kelly Williams
Career Strategist & President
Security Cleared Careers
Expert Resume Solutions
Business: (732) 686-6455
Email: info@expertresumesolutions.com
www.ExpertResumeSolutions.com

Job Board: wwww.SecurityClearedCareers.com

Veteran

Doug Andrews Manorville , NY

I believe I sent everyone who has replied to this thread a copy of my resume. I really appreciate all the knowledge you have shared with me. It's definitely been a big help with figuring out what I need to fix.

Thanks again,

Doug

Advisor

Rik Brown Grand Rapids , MI

Doug: if you're still looking for some advice on resumes, I could send you mine and give you my phone # to talk about it if you wish. Most people have CVs that are WAY too long and they lose interview opportunities as a result.

Rik Brown

Advisor

Sean Venden Yarmouth , ME

Tim - I'd be happy to look over your resume. Please send it to me at sean.venden@gmail.com, or sean.venden@nike.com. if you have it in MSWord format, that works best.

Thanks.

Advisor

Duke Khadan Sawh Keyport , NJ

Be glad to help a fellow veteran. You may send your resume to duke4446@gmail.com.

Duke

Advisor

Pat Lozito Alabaster , AL

Feel free to send me your resume and I can help you. plozito@himconnections.com

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