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Sarah Bates

Advisor

Role and Company

Writing Tutor, Palomar Community College

Expertise

25 years experience in marketing, advertising, & communications

Location

Fallbrook , CA

About Sarah

I worked in the advertising field for over 20 years as an account executive and copywriter. I began a freelance writing career in 2001 that led to employment at a local newspaper, writing and publishing a book of short stories and a novel, and finally 10 years as a college English Department writing tutor. I have mentored adult students through college into careers and am currently mentoring a retired Army sergeant in the process of writing his memoirs. My novel, Twenty-One Steps of Courage focused on a young Army enlistee who became a guard at the Tomb of the Unknowns despite having lost a leg in Afghanistan. I was also an invited lecturer to a group of former military personnel writers. My objective in joining your group is to help veterans "translate" their skills expressed in military jargon into easy-to-understand business language.

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Sarah's Recent Answers

9 years ago

Advice on adding Project Management to my resume

Jared, American business is only interested profitability: "the bottom line". Use your primary business asset–"The ability to analyze and...

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9 years ago

Resume advice

David, if you still need an opinion on your resume send it to me. Incidentally, every time I sought a...

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9 years ago

Looking for admin advice.

Find your local chapter of SCORE, the organization of successful retired business people who share their expertise with new business...

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9 years ago

the right way to start my own small business

All of the responses to your question thus far are on target. As an example, here is what I did...

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9 years ago

Living expenses and student loans

I tutored academic writing at a community college where many of my students were Marine or Navy vets who left...

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